mm2x2's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shade]

The track started out too loud imo, I would recommend a quite intro, the mixing also needs some work, keep doing your thing, I liked the end :D

H20ghost responds:

Thanks I will Keep that in mind next time.I am currently trying to practice mixing since its not my best but for now I'll try to scrape by next time haha.Thank you for your opinion :)

[Trinity - TAGPilot101YT]

this was good...but the drops need more work....they were kinda weak(the buildup was louder than the drop) maybe lowering the build up volume down can help ?
Good job anyways :D

[Apology]

that was decent ngl.....I suggest experimenting with melodies more...2 repetitive 4 me...also the first half felt a little empty ..........I hear some clashing at 1:40...nothing an EQ cant fix tho
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looking forward to hear more from you!...good luck m8 :d

Curruff responds:

Thank you! I suppose the melody was a bit repetitive, but I don't understand where you're getting at with the equalizing tbh. In that section, imho it sounds fine to me

[The Faithful Warrior - TAGPilot101YT]

waw u keep getting better with every song :D
there is some very nice melodies and sound design here!
but u added too much stuff imo..
and here is some stuff you can fix/Improve
1-The drum pattern that starts at 0:06 does not start smoothly (the kick clashes with the bass a little bit)
2-The Nay thing added at around 0:20 is off key and needs more EQing (Middle Freq crashing)
3-U then added a piano thingy which was barley audible (not necessary)
4-A moment of silence between the drop and build up ...would be great
5-at 1:37 u added the pirate melody and then a female choir and then a piano....it was crowded ...everything was fighting...
6-one of the growls at the drops is too distorted compared to the rest (I do this all the time lol )
7-the silence at 2:50 was very sudden...a crash/impact/downfilter can fix this issue
8-3:11 was also very sudden (Talking about the transition)
9- the drop arrangement is awesome ! for real ,but the female choir ruins it...and it feels super crowded after adding the pirate melody

My top suggestion is to try and keep some ideas for future songs instead of trying to implement all your ideas in 1 track....good job...looking forward to hear more...good luck with music

TAGPilot101YT responds:

Thanks bro! And yeah it is kinda crowded and I was kinda lazy to add effects and the choir in the drop was to reduce repetition lol.

[Traversing the Fjord]

This is lovely
but isn't the violin starting too soon?
maybe letting the chime effect fade out first was a better idea...or no effect at all... depends

I wish this was longer tho...keep up the good job! looking forward to hear more :D

Everratic responds:

Thank you for the review. I'm fine with the intro, but I understand that some people might think the violin comes in too soon. I'm glad you still enjoyed it!

[WASTED! & TF - Desu Yo (Koromi Remix)]

Ok....first of all I do not know the original song ...and this is a remix....so yee...this can be an issue ....
the whole track is quite...try increasing the master volume next time.
imo, at the first half of the first drop u added the lead too early.. also it feels off sometimes,
the second half is much better but the transition at 1:26 is weird....(maybe add 1 bar of silence and then add a riser?)......
everything else sounds good tbh , good Job
Looking forward to hear more from you !! Good luck

( I am pretty sure that u r the one who added these chants hehe)

[Nice Day]

Waw
this sounds good and all...but 1:07 was so abrupt :C
maybe stretching the crash will help next time :D

[Anomaly in the DimensioN]

Yeeee ....everything looks gud ....not sure about the transition at 2:38 tho

[213]

This sounds good my friend!here is some stuff you can improve!
1-The second drop does not match the style of your song(also off key)...
2-One of the wubs at 1:45 to 1:56 is weak compered to the others ( the one that goes ed ed ed) add distortion !
3-2:03 I think this part needs more bass....if that is not your style ....it is fine.

But everything else waaaw.....It feels like this track was made for me.
looking forward to hear more! I wish you the best of luck xd

[-Internal Chaos- [Hyperstacks OST]]

This is so good....everything is perfect...mixing,melody,drums...effects..everything!
Fits perfectly for a boss fight !!
Also the vocals at 0:32 are so familiar where did i hear them...a Waterflame song? I think(Especially the hooooo vocal sample xD)

Preds responds:

Thank you! Glad you liked it :)

Probably! Waterflame and I have the same Vocal pack soooo, yeah!