this was good...but the drops need more work....they were kinda weak(the buildup was louder than the drop) maybe lowering the build up volume down can help ?
Good job anyways :D
this was good...but the drops need more work....they were kinda weak(the buildup was louder than the drop) maybe lowering the build up volume down can help ?
Good job anyways :D
that was decent ngl.....I suggest experimenting with melodies more...2 repetitive 4 me...also the first half felt a little empty ..........I hear some clashing at 1:40...nothing an EQ cant fix tho
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looking forward to hear more from you!...good luck m8 :d
Thank you! I suppose the melody was a bit repetitive, but I don't understand where you're getting at with the equalizing tbh. In that section, imho it sounds fine to me
waw u keep getting better with every song :D
there is some very nice melodies and sound design here!
but u added too much stuff imo..
and here is some stuff you can fix/Improve
1-The drum pattern that starts at 0:06 does not start smoothly (the kick clashes with the bass a little bit)
2-The Nay thing added at around 0:20 is off key and needs more EQing (Middle Freq crashing)
3-U then added a piano thingy which was barley audible (not necessary)
4-A moment of silence between the drop and build up ...would be great
5-at 1:37 u added the pirate melody and then a female choir and then a piano....it was crowded ...everything was fighting...
6-one of the growls at the drops is too distorted compared to the rest (I do this all the time lol )
7-the silence at 2:50 was very sudden...a crash/impact/downfilter can fix this issue
8-3:11 was also very sudden (Talking about the transition)
9- the drop arrangement is awesome ! for real ,but the female choir ruins it...and it feels super crowded after adding the pirate melody
My top suggestion is to try and keep some ideas for future songs instead of trying to implement all your ideas in 1 track....good job...looking forward to hear more...good luck with music
Thanks bro! And yeah it is kinda crowded and I was kinda lazy to add effects and the choir in the drop was to reduce repetition lol.
Waw
this sounds good and all...but 1:07 was so abrupt :C
maybe stretching the crash will help next time :D
This sounds good my friend!here is some stuff you can improve!
1-The second drop does not match the style of your song(also off key)...
2-One of the wubs at 1:45 to 1:56 is weak compered to the others ( the one that goes ed ed ed) add distortion !
3-2:03 I think this part needs more bass....if that is not your style ....it is fine.
But everything else waaaw.....It feels like this track was made for me.
looking forward to hear more! I wish you the best of luck xd
This is so good....everything is perfect...mixing,melody,drums...effects..everything!
Fits perfectly for a boss fight !!
Also the vocals at 0:32 are so familiar where did i hear them...a Waterflame song? I think(Especially the hooooo vocal sample xD)
Thank you! Glad you liked it :)
Probably! Waterflame and I have the same Vocal pack soooo, yeah!
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